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JordynPallas
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• 11/25/2015

Bear Mountain and Panorama. :)

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What's up, guys? So, seeing as we are currently developing characters for Bear Mountain High School, the main rival of Panorama, it's time we discovered more about the two school's relationship. :)

Bear Mountain, compared to Panorama, is pretty much exactly the same. They have an equal amount of students and teachers, classes, and homework. But they're completely different. And that's because, Panorama only accepts students they think will work well with their project. All of the rejects attend Bear Mountain, because the principal of Bear Mountain, Melissa Simmons, knows about everything going on at Panorama, and is determined to put a stop to it.

Now, about the Detention scene. If everything goes according to plan, three students will have their consciousnesses stored on jump drives, and they will have "mysteriously disappeared" by the next day. Of course, Whitney will be heartbroken over Ami's death, while Scott will be like: "What did I tell you?" And it's Rose who finds and steals the jump drive stored with Kaleb's consciousness on it. Then, our main four will head to Walter's house, and from there, upload Kaleb's consciousness onto Walter's computer. Kaleb will explain everything to the main four, which makes them more determined than ever to bring Principal Wright down.

Well, that's all for now. Tell me what you think about these ideas! :D

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JordynPallas
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• 11/25/2015

That's a brilliant idea Kelly! I love it. I've been wondering what Melissa knew/What her attitude towards it is and this is perfect! :D

I think that sounds like a great plan as far as the main four go. We'll just need to figure out what makes them go to Walter's house, I guess. :)

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• 11/25/2015

I love this idea, it sounds amazing! I think it's perfect, and I'm all for this idea. :D

I do have some questions, though. Does the public and do the students know that Kaleb, Lucy, and Ami are dead, or do they think that something else has happened to them? And secondly, as I'm about to reply to the conversation, what exactly happens during the brain transfer thing? Do they did after the transfer has been completed, and the machine kills them, or (slightly more morbidly) does Principal Wright kill them? I'm just wondering, as I'm wondering what Lucy's reaction should be. :)

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• 11/25/2015

Thank you guys so much! :D

To answer your questions, Mira, yes, even though there's no real proof of their dead bodies, since David burns them. Secondly, during the transfer thing, their brain scans are literally their consciousnesses, and the machine overheats accidentally and kills them. It's very confusing, but I will try to explain it as we go. :)

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• 11/25/2015

No problem, Kelly! :D

Woah, that sounds extremely disturbing and spooky, yet totally awesome at the same time. That sounds good to me! So she feels the explosion or heat thing, and that's what kills her, not the transfer itself?

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• 11/25/2015

Yes. And I will still roleplay Kaleb when he becomes installed in Walter's computer. :)

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• 11/25/2015

Okay, that's fine! Now, to kill off a character… *Hunger Games cannon fires*

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• 11/25/2015

So, I had an idea. If this contradicts what you had in mind, Kelly, feel free to say no. I'm just going off what I know.

So, Melissa wants to stop David and the easiest way would be to get him in jail. The only problem is that she has no proof. David obviously keeps this under tight wraps, and so even though she knows about what he's doing, she can't prove that to the Police. So, Melissa assembles a small group of trusted students from Bear Mountain to pretty much go undercover and collect evidence against him, in hopes of getting his operation of sorts shut down.

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• 11/26/2015

That sounds like a great idea, Jordyn! It would allow the two schools to intertwine, and it could help the main four to have an ally on their side. :)

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• 11/26/2015

Thanks! :) I really wanted to have some more interaction between the two schools and this gives us an opportunity to use BMHS students as part of the plot. :)

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